...haven't updated in awhile, for a few reasons. One of the reasons is I simply forget. Another reason was because I was without my car for a few days, that was bad. You would think not having a car and being forced to stay inside your apartment for a few days would make me write constantly right? Nope, everytime I tried to write I would always be thinking about my car, wether it was okay...if the mechanics were gonna make up some crap about an expensive part they had to replace...etc. Forcing myself to write made things worse, haha. So, I watched alot of Alfred Hithcock
films, he really is a genious, but everyone knows that and I won't go into it, but Shadow of a Doubt is one of the best movies ever made.
I did do some more outlining though. I outlined two more robbery scenes (one involving a farm house, another involving a elegant mansion), I also went deeper into the relationship between MIles, Bethany and Elijah, not sure if I want a love triangle going, I doubt it. I also outlined a scene involving MIles trying to free some slaves while they're master is sleeping, but the slaves don't want to leave because they feel they'll be worse off in the long run, the way I got it written is kind of controversal. And I introduced three villians (who work for the MAIN villian), who get hired to find the Tidewater Bandits and kill them, because of one of their robberies, I made it so they came from the Wild West...so there are some funny moments that mix in they're Wild West slang with dealing with southern slang...well atleast I think it's funny. So I haven't been totally slackin the last two weeks, and I'll try to update every two days.